I think it would be neat to randomly put in parts of Emma's interview, almost in places where it doesn't really make sense. It would help bring out the message that she was a little lost throughout the interview, but doing her best to contribute. Random things to include would be like her bunny comment, or how she feels most comfortable in the computer room. I also liked the shift that happened in the interview with her adjectives. If we put her adjectives at the beginning and ending of the script, it would help show her growth, even within the 13 minute interview. It would finish her portion of the interview in a strong viewpoint.
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